Last Batch of New Ink'd Logos Before the First Critique
As the title states, this is the last batch of new logos before I choose logo(s) for Monday's critique. Again, feel free to let me know which ones you like.
Just make sure you can read the type. Some of the type seems a little difficult to read due to the shapes you are using. Let it be more organic and flowing instead of a typeface that feels "filled in" and chunky. If it's a graffiti-esque type style then let it be graffiti. I do like the donut with the "keith haring" type marks coming out of it...but again, that's your call. The clouds are just too much don't you think? and I think using Black as our color makes it seem a little too urban/nightclub/...
I thought the clouds might be too much,but I went there just to see how it would look. The dark brown that I am using looks too dark(I think that's the black you are referring to) so I'll lighten that. In regards to the typeface, after I ink'd it in Illustrator, I felt like it lost most of its graffiti like "feel" so I may sketch more variations of the graffiti logo and scsn it in if I have time. Thanks for the input.
Just make sure you can read the type. Some of the type seems a little difficult to read due to the shapes you are using. Let it be more organic and flowing instead of a typeface that feels "filled in" and chunky. If it's a graffiti-esque type style then let it be graffiti. I do like the donut with the "keith haring" type marks coming out of it...but again, that's your call. The clouds are just too much don't you think? and I think using Black as our color makes it seem a little too urban/nightclub/...
ReplyDeleteI thought the clouds might be too much,but I went there just to see how it would look. The dark brown that I am using looks too dark(I think that's the black you are referring to) so I'll lighten that. In regards to the typeface, after I ink'd it in Illustrator, I felt like it lost most of its graffiti like "feel" so I may sketch more variations of the graffiti logo and scsn it in if I have time. Thanks for the input.
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